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  • Mood: Peaceful
  • Listening to: Daft Punk
  • Reading: Creepypasta
  • Watching: Daft Punk
  • Playing: Skyrim
  • Eating: pretzels
So, I've never actually written a story using first person, and I'm curious to try it. So I want to write one to try it out.

I've been thinking about writing from the point of view of Ascaris (I'm torn between the name Ascaris and Dracun, still deciding) who is Scollex's brother (they're both named after something relating to parasitic worms). He hasn't appeared yet before, but I want to add more antagonists to my story universe thingy. So far I have Glen, which is an enemy mainly to Kage (however he's also hostile towards the others due to them being killers and stuff), and Scollex, who is also an enemy to Kage (but he might get along with Zehnder or something). Ascaris might be a little different when it comes to motives though. Won't spoil anything.

Anyway, this should be an interesting thing for me, might write it today, but chances are slim 'cause I don't think I'll have time to.

I want to know which name you guys think is better, Ascaris or Dracun.
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ksc0130 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
First person is awesome!!! I love the name Ascaris.
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Scorpio1996 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ascaris sounds scarier. Dracun almost sounds like Duncan, which isn't very scary...
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GingaAkam Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Professional General Artist
lol XD 'duncan'
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Scorpio1996 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
DUNCAN! THE EVIL BROTHER TO SCROLLEX! XD
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Kagekao-PLZ Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
Ascaris for sure :icondragontailfaster:
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SaviaTwilight Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Student Photographer
First person is fun! Especially once you get used to writing 'me' and 'I' dozens of times a page XD

Ascaris looks cool btw :3
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WolfieJenny Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist
"watching: daft punk" hehe guess you really do like their pretty helmets
i like dracun because it reminds me of draco, but i dont know if thats okay seeing as their names are supposed to be related to parasitic worms
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GingaAkam Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Professional General Artist
XD yes I do
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darkdragonqueen3000 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
what is the sum of cat + brick + pi + kagekao ?
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GingaAkam Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Professional General Artist
Hmmm . . . Kagekao as a cat sitting on a brick doing math problems?
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