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Something I realized about 'Hide and Seek' and tag

Journal Entry: Thu Aug 22, 2013, 2:40 AM
ケケケー
怒ってるかい~? おまえ~?
~~~

Okay so for my story Hide and Seek Hide and Seek
“Hooray! It’s the weekend!” A little boy cried as he ran out the front doors of his small elementary school. The bell marking the end of school had just rung; and the children were walking, although most were running, out of the school. Many of them eagerly started home to their parents, but a few stayed behind to chat with their friends.
A small group of children gathered to speak to one another about their weekend plans. There were about five of them, and they were all in the same class together. In the third grade, their lives were carefree and happy; the only burden being homework or chores.
“What should we play?” A little boy, his name was Jimmy, asked his friends. “I don’t have to be back home until five or so.”
“How about tag? Tag is fun!” Another boy responded.
“Nah, that’s a stupid idea Billy!” A girl said to the boy, “We played that yesterday!” She made a noise that suggested that playin
(YES, I KNOW THAT STORY WAS SUBMITTED LIKE A FEW MONTHS AGO BUT I'VE BEEN THINKING ABOUT IT RECENTLY; DEAL WITH IT.) Some people were wondering why children were walking home alone and unsupervised.

When I saw these comments first I thought it was just bad story writing on my part and I made a mistake by not thoroughly thinking that through. But now I realized that no, it wasn't me not thinking it through. It's because where I live there is a very low crime rate and people are very friendly, whereas in America there's a higher crime rate so children aren't allowed to walk home alone if they're young. Well, in my neighborhood, as I've said, there's a very low crime rate and I guess people trust each other, and kids are allowed to walk home unsupervised. Sometimes when I'm walking to/from school I see itty bitty toddlers walking home/to school XD

So yeah, the reason why the children were walking home alone was because I'm not familiar with American lifestyles too much and things like that, so it was pretty much based on my experiences for that part. I'm guessing other parts of my stories have also been influenced by my irl experiences that won't match up to American lifestyles .-.
For example, I find it weird that Americans wear shoes inside the house. I guess it's just Japanese to be barefoot, but I don't think I'd be able to handle having shoes on inside the house XD


Anywho, was tagged:


1)Do you like soap operas/novelas?

Not sure :/ depends on the show itself I guess.


2)Have you ever laughed so hard you cried?

Yes. Many many many many many times.


3)If so, what was the joke?
If not, what's the strangest thing you've done from laughing too hard?

Hmm, can't quite remember. But it could have been something along the lines of 'THANK OLD NAVY, THE JOHN LEMONS IN THE BARN ARE 20% OFF; AMAZING SALE GOES ALL NIGHT TO GET LUCKY' inside jokes. inside jokes everywhere.
But I think it was something else.


4)Would you like to air piano?

-starts doing Ghosts N Stuff motion- NA, NA NA, NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA- :iconheadmau5plz:


5)What fandom do you think you are the most into?

Creepypasta and DAFT PUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNK


6)No!
No more sauce now!
I paid for yummy steaks!

F-CK YOU BRO I'M HUNGRY.


7)What song are the following lyrics from?
MusicPuedo levantarte
Te puedo mostrar lo que quieres ver
y te llevará a donde quieres estarMusic
Hint: it sounds better in English

GASP, I KNOW THIS ONE! IT'S FROM THE SONG THAT GOES
'MusicPuedo levantarte
Te puedo mostrar lo que quieres ver
y te llevará a donde quieres estarMusic
'

yes I did just do that


9)When was the last time you used crayons?

I used the crayon brush on Sai, but other than that, can't remember. Am not fond of crayons at all. Too messy. I guess if you have skills you may be able to do it right. And everybody will be dancing and be feelin' it right. And everybody will be dancing and be doin it right. Everybody will be dancing and be feeling alright. Everybody will be dancing and till we're DOIN' IT RIGHT. -headbangs with my icon-


10)Is it safe to come out yet?

Possibly. Or is Zehnder still ma-OH LORD ZALGO RUN FOR COVER!




Also, I was thinking about making a DA account for Kage; you know, when where it's pretending to actually be him (I know what you might be thinking, but I only hate the accounts that do this that go NU, YOU'RE WRONG, I'M THE REAL -insert fictional character name here- I HAVE PROOF! -insert bullsh-t evidence here- and then go to every picture with that character and say something like NU, YOU'RE WRONG, IT WENT LIKE THIS -explanation that's more dignifying to the character-). Mostly because I need rp practice because I still think I'm bad at rping .-. So I think it would help. It would also be fuuuun :3 (also I could finally get on the chat as Kage without being drunk XD)

So tell me what'chya think about that. ALSO, the name Kagekao is taken so I need to think of something else. I was thinking 'KageKao-Sama'


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ああ~ おまえ 怒ってるだよ! ケケケ~!
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ProxyModel Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Where is this magical chatroom of which you speak madam??
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GingaAkam Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Professional General Artist
there's a link to it on my profile :3
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IzzyLuvsYou22 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kids from where I am from walk to and from school... but we have a pretty bad crime rate, and it's only getting worse. The parents don't really care and they let their kids do whatever, resulting in bad things happening to the kids and the parents in turn wondering how something like that could ever happen. It's quite ridiculous.
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Anthum Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Student General Artist
I normally take my shoes off once I get to my room or the front door, and always at peoples homes. (<-  I feel very rude if I don't, also I hate getting outside on my stuff) I like the way the ground is, textures and such, I might wear socks to bed if my feet are cold though.
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Psychotic-Love Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Do you watch anime? I just suddenly got curious cuz I'm weird.
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GingaAkam Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Professional General Artist
I watched a few, watched half of Ao No Exorcist on the television, watched this other one that I can't quite remember the title of, and going to watch Soul Eater once I finish the manga
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Psychotic-Love Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I hardly ever finish the anime I'm watching... :icononionfailplz:
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AutisticArtHC Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very friendly? Low crime rate? I thought you lived in Japan, not Canada.
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GingaAkam Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Professional General Artist
XD I live in the ryukyu islands, much smaller and friendlier than mainland Japan. Maybe we're the Canada of Japan XD 
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TheShadowLady Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
At my house we usually go walk around barefoot, unless it's winter. Yeah, I couldn't imagine walking around the house with shoes on, it sounds uncomfortable:/
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DIY-Couple Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
they ware shows on inside the house? my dad does my mother and sister ware socks...i got bare footed XD i like feeling thing with my feet!!! huehuehue XD
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GingaAkam Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Professional General Artist
XD me too. I pet my cat with my foot sometimes.
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DIY-Couple Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD awesome i pet my dog XD and shes like "what...are you doing? should u use ur hands for this?!" XD
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Enigma1315 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You see toddlers walking home alone? :XD: Yeah, you don't usually see that where I live. I don't really like to wear shoes inside unless I have to, like if something glass dropped on the floor. My mother usually wears flip flops inside, but I don't know if you'd count that as shoes...
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Gravitii-CS Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
I'm not allowed to where shoes inside cuz it gets things dirty

Unless you count School and Stores, I don't know anybody that wears shoes inside //well slippers but they're for inside so that doesn't count lol.//
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Lea-Masuku Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

Huh, funny though, because there are some neighborhoods around where I live here in America that allows kids to walk around freely to/from school. Yet again, where I live, absolutely NOTHING happens. Well, except for thunderstorms and forest fires. :P

And yeah, there are some people who wear their shoes inside, but we usually take them off whenever we arrive home. Most people find it awkward to take their shoes off when visiting a friend or something like that, so they usually just keep their shoes on.

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GinKyofu13 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I forgot to add it, if someone who says that it is a "bad story", they don't know when they see a good story. They are being jerks to try to break your pride. You actually did a good job, and I expected you to make another story involving what if teenagers sneaked out and get themselves in the situation due to the rumors. I loved stories with lessons in them, but you actually pulled off with the creativity, time and effort to pull it off. That's why I am watching you since there are others who inspired me to do a Creepypasta stories too. I hoped you keep up and don't let people looked down at you like the stories. We loved your stories and art, that's all that matter since you bring inspiration and creativity. Keep up Soldier.
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GingaAkam Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Professional General Artist
:D why thank you, I don't recall anyone saying it was bad, I'm just super paranoid and have low self esteem so I thought I made a big mistake by that XD
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GinKyofu13 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome Don't let low esteem get the better of you, I have low esteem before when I deleted my stories that none love anymore. You didn't make the big mistake, but please don't let low esteem get the better of you since you shows the sign of creativity within your story!!! No matter what! Don't let super paranoid gets the better of you, that got me in a lot of situations when I began the deviantart account and fanfiction. Takes deep breath and remained calm, but keep it up.! Let your creativity go wild. :hug: So don't worry about it and always smile.
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GingaAkam Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Professional General Artist
:D aww thank you, I try not to let it get the best of me :3
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GinKyofu13 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome anytime!
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Theplutt97 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
here in sweden we don't wear shoes inside either, so I also think its weird that they have shoes indoors, so it isn't just i japan they are barefoot

and here I live we let children go on there own so I didn't react on that in the story
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GinKyofu13 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I don't like wearing shoes in the house except I do it all the time sometimes without realizing it. Hide and Seek wasn't a bad story except it gives a lesson that parents should keep an eye on their children, but sometimes children think that they are too smart for safety than listening to their parents. Don't say your story is a bad story, but it is actually a good one that has a lesson between fiction and life. 

Also making a KageKao account is a good idea too!
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Arothewinddragon Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I hardly weae shoes anyway xD almost always barefoot.
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dgmnfangirl080 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hm. that thing with the neighboorhood is pretty similar. I guess that security stuff is only in big cities in general, which I understand.
And huh. I always walk barefoot (even though mom wants me to put on socks, NEVOUR >D) why would people wear shoes...I feel ignorant for asking that lol
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TheProxy09 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
I hate wearing shoes in the house. My mom wouldn't let me either, where I live there's this kind of mud that if it gets on the floor or your clothes, it will never come off. So everyone in my family doesn't wear shoes. 

And yeah, KageKao-Sama sounds awesome!
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Makayla5672418 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I HATE wearing shoes on in the house. I don't get why other people do. My mum makes me wear shoes to other people's houses and I just don't understand.
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KitKatEmmy65 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
I'm from America and I don't wear shoes in the house. My house has 11 people living in it and none of them wear shoes in the house. So not all Americans wear shoes in their house. ^_^
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thebeastsmaelstrom Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Kage-sama-llama
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Branwen-o-Nefyn Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
It's a strange thing, I agree, how people from different countries have totally different ways of doing things...

I live in Canada, which most people think is very much like the US. It's not. We do things that freak out the Americans... like leaving our doors unlocked. Letting our kids walk to school on their own. Inviting strangers in for kitchen parties. (This is a Maritime tradition, the kitchen's the warmest room in the house, and in vicious cold winters, where better to party? Besides, the food is right THERE...)

And I'm with you... no shoes in the house. Ick.
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MermaidCutie Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't wear shoes on the house cause I feel weird doing that, you know having dirty shoes in the house , getting the floors dirty. I don't even know why my dad does it XD. Also awesome Kage gets his own page :D
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MermaidCutie Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
In not on lol
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okami129 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
KageKao-sama could work
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STARRY-NlGHTS Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer

I wear shoes in the house because my dogs are butts and scratched the floor to no end. xD

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ItsCursorBby Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I never wear shoes inside the house o.0
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VampireQueenEffeffia Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it really depends on where in my country you are. In my particular area, kids are allowed to ride on bicycle handlebars all over the place *I'm not of course* and can do whatever (again, not including me). About an hour's drive away, everyone has BARS on all of their windows because the crime rate is so high. Then there are the Earth-bound Garden of Edens, where everyone knows and loves each other (but such neighborhoods are often devastated by the worst crimes at some point in time). It's like leaving a half dozen hens in a coop for a week then collecting their eggs. Some eggs will be bad, some will be okay, some will be great. Just like the areas here.
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ElizabethAuditore Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student
The only reason I wear shoes in the house is always sandy.
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Nollit Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
Most of the time I don't wear shoes inside, because SOCKS RULE!
Warm fluffy socks... Aah... ^^
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MermaidCutie Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes you go!
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Nollit Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
:dummy:
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MermaidCutie Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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demonwolfgirl99 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*in america* the furthest my mom has let me go by myself is mailbox......after i took karate classes... 
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ElizabethAuditore Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student
Wow.
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demonwolfgirl99 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yup
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ElizabethAuditore Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student
I now relise the diffrent between parents.
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demonwolfgirl99 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol XD
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ElizabethAuditore Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Student
;P.... But really I don't know if I just lived in a low crime rate city but I was walking around the block alone when I was like 9 or so.
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demonwolfgirl99 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh really? wow
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ElizabethAuditore Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Student
Manzanillo is safe too... But really the the army people is a bit to much.-_-
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EvilEndings Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

WOOP! I don't wear shoes indoors! 'Cause I'm British bi'ches!

I don't know if that's just me being freaking lazy, and other people from my town find it wierd, but mehhhhh.

 

Japan sounds like such a good place to live. And...

it's

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