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   (Link to Part 1 in Description)

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Mark left the bar he was at. He had come to this bar to have a little bit to drink before he faced Beatrice but he didn’t feel like drinking at all and hardly touched what he had bought. Mark told himself that he would go and apologize like a man and set off towards her house.
Mark reached out his fist and knocked on the door loudly. He waited. No one answered. He pressed the doorbell several times, and could hear it ring through the house. Still no one answered. Getting worried, he knocked on the door and shouted her name, still no one answered. He tried the door knob, and it opened. That was odd; she usually kept the door locked.
The first thing he noticed when he entered was the open window, the wood bordering the sides of it seemed to have a lot of claw marks on it, like a cat had been there. He walked into the dining room, calling out her name. He paused when he saw the bottle of champagne on the table. It was the bottle that he had had in his cabinet, it was open. He picked it up and examined it. There was a note taped to the side of it. The note read:
Beatrice
I’m so sorry about our fight! I really want to make it up to you because I love you with all my heart and soul!
~ Mark
Mark stared at the note, looking at the little heart following the word “soul”, he didn’t remember sending this to her.
“Beatrice!?” he shouted. He walked around the table and his blood ran cold. He saw her, his darling Beatrice, on the floor. She wasn’t moving, and shards of broken glass surrounded her.
“Beatrice!” Mark shouted and fell to the floor to pick her up, ignoring the cuts given to him by the shards of glass; he saw from the shapes of them that they were from a wine glass. Tears streamed from his eyes and he hugged her, he knew she was dead.
“That’s so sweet of him!”
Mark paused and looked up. There it was; the monster. It was sitting in the windowsill, imitating her voice.
“I’m so sorry we even fought in the first place!”
Mark stared at it, anger boiling up inside.
“それがのんだ。死んだ!ケケケ! 毒だよ!ケケケ!” (Then she drank it. Then she died! -Laughter- It’s poison! -Laughter-)
It laughed hard, putting its hand up to its face to try and stop.
“You think this is funny!? You killed her! I’ll kill you!” Mark stood up and grabbed the bottle.
"おまえ 怒ってるかい~?" (You mad?)
Mark threw the bottle but the monster jumped out of the window before it reached it. He was going to kill it. He would make it pay.
Mark walked over to Beatrice’s dresser; he knew where she kept a pistol for self-defense. He pulled it out and opened the clip, seeing that there were only four bullets left; that was alright, he only wanted one.
Mark ran out the door, there was no sign of the monster anywhere. He knew it was going back to his apartment though. Mark ran as fast as he could, ignoring crosswalk signs and other people; just running. He reached his apartment building and ran up to his floor. Slamming the door open to his apartment. He was right, the monster was there.
It was lying on top of a bookshelf holding a glass of wine, the wine bottle in the other hand.
“ワイン がもない!” (The wine is all gone!)
Mark flew into a rage and pointed the gun towards it, shooting a bullet. It sprung up and jumped to the wall, leaving the wine glass and clinging to it with its claws so that its back was facing mark. He shot a second time, and it flipped over so it was now facing Mark, its left arm and leg bending farther than a normal human’s. He shot again and it dropped to the floor, now on all fours. Mark shot yet again and it did a roll to dodge, then it jumped back onto the wall, staying there and staring at him.
Mark walked over to it angrily and pointed the pistol towards its forehead. He pulled the trigger, but there was only a click, indicating that there were no more bullets.
The monster began to laugh crazily.
“フェイル!” (Fail!)
Mark was enraged and swung the gun towards it for a melee attack, but the monster crawled to the side, picking up the wine glass that it had left on the book shelf. It threw the wine glass at Mark but Mark dodged it, then it threw the wine bottle and it hit him square between the eyes. Mark passed out.

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Mark regained consciousness; he was face to face with the monster. It was clinging to the ceiling, its arms and legs bending back at a ninety degree angle so it was facing him. Its mask changed again. The luminous smile on the dark black side of its mask disappeared, and the angry frown reappeared on the white side of its mask. Then he said to him in a dark voice, lacking the happy playfulness of before
“おまえは面白くない。” (You’re boring.)
It made a low growling hissing sound, and pounced.

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Later that day the police arrived at Mark’s apartment, a neighbor had called them because they had heard gun shots. Mark was found dead, claw marks all over his body and throat clawed out. The kill seemed animal, and claw marks were found along the walls and ceiling. Bloody footprints were found headed towards the window, so they determined that it was done by a human. Upon further inspection of the body, they found something carved into the skin on his forehead.
“退屈な。” (Boring.)
PART 1: [link]


(go to part 1 for better description)
When it says when Kagekao imitated the voice, it just means that he's speaking in a higher pitch, he can't actually imitate voices perfectly.

And again special thanks:

:iconsirlowain: for helping me with translations and stuff, really appreciate it bro :D
And to :iconguyno22: for helping me with the gun knowledge; I know nothing about guns lol :iconpyramidheadderpplz:
You guys are awesome siblings :meow:

So hope you enjoy
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:iconspiderqueenj:
SpiderQueenJ Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I feel like my O.C would get along well with Kagekao
(Kitsune Vampire)
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:iconanyastajia:
Anyastajia Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014  New member Student Traditional Artist
I can't believe that you wrote the story of your boyfriend as a creature not what he is...You are dating right?
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:iconnightpanic:
NightPanic Featured By Owner Edited Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I imagine Happy as and overly excited japanese school girl

and mad as those old man in anime with a demonic growl mixed in -both kinda robotic...

I love it!! can it be my friend?
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:iconnightpanic:
NightPanic Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
i keep reading it as beat rice... and it makes me hungry... 
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:iconask-the-masked-boy:
Ask-The-Masked-Boy Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014
Just kiss! 
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:iconninetailedfoxfox:
ninetailedfoxfox Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
NOICE. really good creepypasta~
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:iconalptraum-gheist:
Alptraum-Gheist Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
goddammit kage stop being best creepypasta
dat line tho: u mad?Problem? 
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:icongoodgirl44:
goodgirl44 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know have a new favorite creepypasta! Kage is such a troll XD
Kage: U mad?
Best line ever XD
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:iconrazielblack:
RazielBlack Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love the character! Kage is pretty cool. I was expecting a little more fear for Mark though.
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:iconnutellaluna:
NutellaLuna Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow awesome story :D
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:iconninjagostorm:
NinjagoStorm Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I....this..... Wow... I FRICKIN love Kagekao
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:icongingaakam:
GingaAkam Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Professional General Artist
I'm glad :D
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:iconkagefan-121:
kagefan-121 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
is kage born in japan or usa just checkaing
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:icongingaakam:
GingaAkam Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Professional General Artist
Japan
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:iconkagefan-121:
kagefan-121 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you
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:iconstarry-nlghts:
STARRY-NlGHTS Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer

Kage, if you're supposed to be scary, all the scary is adorableness for me. Dx

Stahp messing with me Kage. Just stahp.

My teacher said not to bring anything dangerous to school so I thought: So I can't bring Kage to school? D:

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:icontatumsowninsaneworld:
Tatumsowninsaneworld Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD It'd be cool if he could fit in your locker!!
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:iconstarry-nlghts:
STARRY-NlGHTS Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Oyea
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:icontatumsowninsaneworld:
Tatumsowninsaneworld Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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:iconsearchingalone1:
searchingalone1 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
Love the entire character design especially the mask
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:icongingaakam:
GingaAkam Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Professional General Artist
:3 thanks
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:iconiamacooldude17534:
iamacooldude17534 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice story man, I really like it C:
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:icongingaakam:
GingaAkam Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Professional General Artist
:3 thanks
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:iconiamacooldude17534:
iamacooldude17534 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
np
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:iconaxelxenamoon:
AxelXenaMoon Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Professional General Artist
What does Kagekao's voice sound like? Like in comparison to something else's voice.
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:icongingaakam:
GingaAkam Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Professional General Artist
I imagine him having a similar voice to Ninomiya from Arashi [link]
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:iconrinxlenfan4ever:
rinxlenfan4ever Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
:D
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:iconlashawnfonterica:
lashawnfonterica Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
By far my favorite creepypasta
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:iconmarzftw12:
MarzFTW12 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I love how in Creepypasta everyone loves the bad guy/girl XDD
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:iconginkyofu13:
GinKyofu13 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Kagekao, you got my respect dude!
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:icondgmnfangirl080:
dgmnfangirl080 Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
...Kagekao!
You are a frikkin TROLL!
GIMME BROFIST!
:iconbrofistplz:
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:iconthelordshiranui:
TheLordshiranui Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
What program do you use for these stories? Since im still trying to get better at drawing i feel like uploading at least something
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:icongingaakam:
GingaAkam Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Professional General Artist
I just use Microsoft Word and then copy and paste the text to 'enter text' on the submission page :3
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:iconneon-painter:
Neon-Painter Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Dang it,Ginga.Why Microsoft Word!?
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:icongingaakam:
GingaAkam Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Professional General Artist
What else is there? I despise Macs so I don't use pages. And I've been writing since before Stashwriter
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:iconneon-painter:
Neon-Painter Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Student General Artist
No.Not not.I can't have Microsoft Word!And i wanted to do a story.Oh well...
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:iconthelordshiranui:
TheLordshiranui Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
K thank you :)
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:iconlrisbrine:
lrisbrine Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha!!! "Boring" haha is funny how he did that.
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:iconagent-ladue:
Agent-LaDue Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it!! Can I have your permission to use Kagekao in a creepypasta comic I'm making? If not, that's completely fine, but if so could you note me on some of his details surrounding his character, personality traits, and where my character might meet him? Like I said, it's fine if you'd rather not let me use him... I'll give you full credit as well ^^
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:icongingaakam:
GingaAkam Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Professional General Artist
Alright I'll send you a note :D
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:iconlonelygirl140:
lonelygirl140 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
I really love this creepypasta! (Not to mention I am in love with it already T-T) More love! <3
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:iconsoundandscar:
soundandscar Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really well writen ^w^ good job
I can't stop imagining Kage rage quitting at trails HD its impossible…almost…I lost that game and its likely I will lose to kage as well because I'm a boring person X3
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:icongingaakam:
GingaAkam Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Professional General Artist
:D thanks!
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:iconzoradementio:
ZoraDementio Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
DISISMOTERF*CKINGAMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111111!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!one
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:icongingaakam:
GingaAkam Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Professional General Artist
:D glad you think so
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:iconold-marcie1234:
Old-Marcie1234 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
You troll!
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:iconbaka2niisan:
Baka2niisan Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This pasta was amazing! I gonna enjoy make a Kagekao Puppet! But just one detail: he got shoes or not?
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:icongingaakam:
GingaAkam Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Professional General Artist
:D glad you like it; yes he wears shoes; his feet claws go through them to cling to walls and stuff, here's a pic - [link]
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:iconautisticarthc:
AutisticArtHC Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Would it be possible to befriend Kage? As I said, I wanna make a Creepypasta movie, possibly with Kage in it, and the scene I have in my head is the protagonist finding him in a bar and asking him for information(possibly having to chase him to do so), and perhaps working with him to reach the resolution. Does that sound good?
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:icongingaakam:
GingaAkam Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Professional General Artist
Yeah it's possible, it depends on the type of person you are and if he likes you enough to not kill you. I have a story in the works where the protagonist is friends with him
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